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5 ways to structure a presentation for maximum effect
When creating an outline structure for a presentation we are about to give — whether that presentation is in writing, via personal delivery, or via multimedia — there are five basic ways to organise that structure for maximum effect:
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by Time
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by Space
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by Problem & Solution
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by Cause & Effect
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by Motivation
Let's consider each in turn.
1. Structuring your presentation by Time
Let's suppose that your presentation is on the growth of internet presence in businesses.
Your thesis could be:
Businesses are rapidly increasing their presence on the internet because of market pressures.Your organising structure could therefore be:
In January 1998 only X% of businesses had an internet presence of some sort — a website or email address — (because)
reason
reason
reasonBy January 2000 this had grown to Y% (because)
reason
reason
reasonBy January 2003 this had grown to Z% (because)
reason
reason
reasonAnd so on, leading to your conclusion(s).
2. Structuring your presentation by Space
Thesis:
We should structure our new global call centre in Adelaide, AustraliaWhy:
Adelaide is the best location (because)
1. Access to highly trained and motivated staff
2. English is their first language
3. Cheaper cost of living compared to other mainland citiesA. It's a better choice than Brisbane, Australia (because)
reason
reason
reasonB. It's a better choice than India (because)
reason
reason
reasonC. It's a better choice than Ireland (because)
reason
reason
reason...and so on.
3. Structuring your presentation by Problem & Solution
Thesis:
This change proposal should be adopted (because)1. There is a need for the proposed change (because)
A. There is harm in what we are currently doing
example
example
exampleB. The harm is significant (because)
example
example
exampleC. The harm is directly relevant to the audience (because)
example
example
example2. This proposal is the best alternative (because)
A. The proposal is reasonable (because)
example of how it will solve the problemB. The proposal is practical (because)
example of cost:benefit analysisC. The proposal is desirable (because)
example of how it solves the problems without creating new ones3. Summary — a final upbeat statement that leaves your audience thinking positively about your proposal.
4. Structuring your presentation by Cause & Effect
Thesis:
Internal employee communication vehicles need to be formally introducedCause 1:
Employees have no direct chain of communication with senior managementEffects 1:
1. Employees are gossiping negatively over internal email and in the breakout rooms about possible managment initiatives that not even management have considered yet
2. Call centre schedule adherence times are blowing out; people are taking longer breaks than allotted, disrupting traffic and causing longer queues
3. Anecdotal evidence from floor-walking supervisors is that staff are accessing online job boards more and more
4. Engagement scores on recent half-yearly surveys are trending downwards
5. The number of unsolicited resumes sent in to the company has markedly decreased recently
Cause 2:
Managers are so busy managing KPIs and statistics that they've forgotten to manage their peopleEffects 2:
1. Effect
2. Effect
3. Effect ...
Solution:
Implement a formal top-down and bottom-up communication process and channel to help reduce the gossiping and increase engagementCall to Action: Implement management blogs
5. Structuring your presentation by motivation
Based on Monroe's 1935 work, the Motivation Model is a fantastic way of structuring your ideas. It works because it follows a predictable pattern of thinking.
The steps are:
1. Attention — get their attention; make them want to pay attention
2. Need — describe a problem so that the receiver responds with "something needs to be done" or "I need this information"
3. Satisfaction — present a solution to the problem so that the receiver thinks "this is what should be done" or "this information is useful and helps me understand"
4. Visualisation — show the consequences of doing or not doing what is asked for in the 'satisfaction' stage. Your goal is to have the receiver think "if I do this I will be in a better position" or "if I don't do this I will be in a worse position"
5. Action — a call to action; you want the receiver to say "I will do as you suggest" or "I believe you" or "I now feel strongly about this".
Conclusion
As communicators we have access to five fantastic outlining tools to help us structure our presentations for better reception. They are:
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structure by Time
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structure by Space
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structure by Problem & Solution
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structure by Cause & Effect; and
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structure by Motivation
Pick your tool and outline your way to a better communication result!
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